[Report This]Date: October 31 2013 12:14 AM Title: New uses for old toys
This is the second time I've read this story. And I'm very pleased to say, it was just as riveting the second time around. As intense as the physical torment side of things was. I think it paled in comparison to the psychological torture the little gal was forced to endure during that final scene. The whole thing was woven together in that masterfully brutal way that leaves you speechless.
Am going to make sure that I set some time aside to read more of your stories in the days to come.
Author's Response:
i've been trying to think of a way of wording a reply to this without sounding like i'm gushing lol :P But thanks for the awesome breakdown and reveiw ^_^ Glad you enjoyed this and i hope you aren't dissapointed reading the rest of my stuff :)
[Report This]Date: April 08 2013 9:10 PM Title: New uses for old toys
This is so brutal...and yet I like it for some reason. which is strange because I don't normally go for this kind of thing.
Anyways I think that you should expand on this story maybe make a chapter where the fish her out of the bin and use her again (sry perverted part of my mind speaking here).
Author's Response:
Heya, thanks for rating/reviewing :) Glad you enjoyed it!
I think if i was going to continue this i would most likely use a different tiny, the idea of the conclusion of this was to emphasise how truly worthless the SW had become to her former lover.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2013 12:53 PM Title: New uses for old toys
Damn. I read your warning and was still taken aback. Very well written. It was visceral and engaging, both in dialogue and the brutal descriptions. Well done.
Author's Response:
heh heh ^_^ I feel like i should apologise maybe :P But glad you enjoyed it! I was dubious about how this one would be recieved. Thanks for the rating by the way :)
[Report This]Date: April 08 2013 12:55 AM Title: New uses for old toys
Ems! You're awesome! You need to write much more, miss your stories! I'm not much into giant interaction but this was a hot story, the only thing I would have liked better is if Leanne had put Sarah on him. Still a great story, thank you.
Author's Response:
Hehe thanks! Matter of Taste will be updated with its first choice chapters very soon. I think having the giant putting the girl on translated better with the original because i had to adapt this to be able to post it (making it non-first person form the SW's perspective and adding names etc). So probably a little bit of inexperience with this kind of subject matter on my part. Thanks for the rating/review ^_^
Date: April 07 2013 11:30 PM Title: New uses for old toys
That was F-ing BRUTAL. Definitely not my type of story but well written nonetheless.
Author's Response:
Hey, sorry for not marking it a bit clearer, i've hopefully recitfied that now. Thanks for not instantly 1-staring it though, its much appreciated.