Reviews For Jarret Johnson
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Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2013 9:59 AM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

You gotta put some more into your descriptions, you never even established how Stacy looks.

When doing crush, you should describe texture, impulse, and emotions as often as possible. Take your time, don't rush situations. Give people their chance at dialogue, especially the giant in the situation.

Good start, though.

Reviewer: carpette12 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2013 12:04 PM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

amazing! Please continue, it's a very good start! :)

Reviewer: Lil Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 4:06 AM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

Good story :D Need to read the next ! D 

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2013 9:06 PM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

Nice story, I like it so far! I was also wondering what your plans were with "Toy Boy 2".

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2013 8:41 PM Title: Wednesday, September 19, 2012/ Wednesday, August 15, 2012, Day 35/Day 1

Great first chapter, cannot wait to see what she does next.

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