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Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2013 9:37 PM Title: WHAT THE HELL?

Ahhh, I assumed Tonya shrunk them and would torture them! Guess I was wrong! It's unaware, and who knows, maybe if she does discover them, it will turn into 'that typical torture story.'

Great start, nice to see a bit of history shown before the actual action comes. If there is a discovery scene, the knowledge that they were best friends should be nice to know. But if it's solely (foot joke) an unaware story, then I say, Keep on dishing out them chapters! 

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