[Report This]Date: June 27 2013 4:31 AM Title: An Introduction
Great story! I hope you finish it!
Date: February 28 2013 10:16 PM Title: An Introduction
Keep the story coming!
Date: February 11 2013 10:19 PM Title: An Introduction
Hello everyone, I'm sorry for the long wait for an update.
I was in a serious car accident and was in the hospital for a week.
I've only gotten back into things just yesterday. I will continue to update the story as soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2013 11:43 PM Title: An Introduction
Snowball effect, when a story gets one great review, then others will want to read and review. Just don't update TOO often, or it's too fast. I learned that personally. But it's a good story, keep it up.
Date: January 31 2013 11:39 PM Title: An Introduction
Thank you everyone for the kind reviews. I didn't expect this story escalate in popularity like this.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2013 10:33 PM Title: An Introduction
Me likey!
Date: January 31 2013 10:06 PM Title: An Introduction
A satisfyingly simple start to a story. Since you have established a back story between the characters, I don't have much criticism for this. Keep the chapters short and to the pojnt like you have been and this will be a fine, enticing tale.
Expecting more to come.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2013 9:49 PM Title: An Introduction
This story has a great beginning. I can't wait to see if Tonya is unaware, or will find them and goethite them... Maybe you could do both.
Another idea could be having another not-so-kindhearted girl come along, then have Tonya save them somehow, as she IMO really doesn't seem like the torturing type.
Date: January 31 2013 9:13 PM Title: An Introduction
Ahh, a typical one of 'these' stories. Refreshing to see an author decide to write a torture story such as this. I will follow this.