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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

How come you only actually describe Courtney in details? Aren't the other characters important?



Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint, but I'm saving more character detail and background for later. Courtney, as you found in chapter three, had to be explained much more early on. Don't you worry, you'll get to know the characters much better sooner or later.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, just to help but there is a respond button at the bottom of every comment. Use that to respond.

Just sayin...



Author's Response: Just realized that yesterday.. Lol but thanks for helping, it really does mean a lot.

Reviewer: xXFLAREXx Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) Glad you said that, I have just the thing coming up pretty soon.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

(^_^)/ Looking forward to the sick and twisted stuff you can come up with. Just a reminder, dismembering screaming people in front of friends and/or family is always interesting. Mwahahahaha!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, I'm not sure about this. Not being a gory fan, I just don't know. But as a reviewer, not a bad intro. Some dialogue was a bit jumbled. Only thing I saw.

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