[Report This]Date: August 02 2015 11:25 PM Title: Introduction
Poor Michael, feel bad for the little guy. Can't believe Selena could be inconsiderate like that. Really hope to see more of this story. Definitely a rare gem.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2015 12:55 PM Title: Introduction
I like those day to day lives of shrunken or little people and the challenges they face and the good moments.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2014 7:19 PM Title: Introduction
I'm hoping for some sexy stuff, if you know what I mean. Great story!
Date: November 30 2012 12:32 AM Title: Introduction
Sweet, another update! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 11:12 PM Title: Introduction
It's not bad. This is probably some of the better writing you've done, so you're definitely improving, and you actually seem to be making an effort to distance yourself from a pretty well-worn genre. Mainly I'd say try to clean up technical errors to make it easier to read and keep working at characterization. You're making good progress.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 10:08 PM Title: Introduction
its ok i like the sister character alot
Date: November 29 2012 1:43 PM Title: Introduction
I really good start. I hope he will be ok at school!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 11:44 AM Title: Introduction
Wait a minute. How can Jack be Michaels twin if he was born 4 later?
Date: November 29 2012 7:25 AM Title: Introduction
Nice.and the characters are very similar the ones in the story im making right now.
Date: November 29 2012 5:01 AM Title: Introduction
This is a favorite scenario of mine to read -- the natirally tiny person trying to live a semi-normal life. Lots of potential. I also like that there are two tiny brothers. That should give this a slightly different spin than other similar stories.
Date: November 29 2012 12:30 AM Title: Introduction
2 tines! very different. its been awhile since u last posted
Author's Response: Yeah, school has really messed up my schedule. And I made the 2 tinies because I didn't want the protagonist (Micheal) to be alone in a world of giants.
Date: November 29 2012 12:30 AM Title: Introduction
2 tines! very different. its been awhile since u last posted
Date: November 29 2012 12:21 AM Title: Introduction
FIRST!!! All joking aside, I am a big fan of most of your work and hope that this story is continued. I really like the fact that you have two characters at that size so that the main character has someone that is just like him. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: "Thank you, and I'm very fond of your work as well. "Randall" is coming out to be a very good story. Keep it up. P.s. I like how you clearly described your characters, but "weaved" it into the story. Good job.