Reviews For Winter Goddess
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Reviewer: supernatural Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Warm awakening

chaper two saved this one for me, nice turn around

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Warm awakening

One thing I noticed is that you don't always remember to put the speech on separate lines to the description. It's good practise. And if speech is mixed in with longer paragraphs it can make a story hard to follow.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the remark, I'll keep it in mind! :)

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