Reviews For The Toy Boy
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Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, she changed really fast. Or did she...

Might be a trick. Watch out Julian!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

The mouth play scene was handled originally, and I'm getting used to the first person narrative, which is also less regular on the forum. Off to chapter 3 now.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm glad they can be friends. A nice ending to the chapter. I wonder what else you have planned. I assume the story will be over when he has been through all of his friends? That sounds like sensible place to to end as people will be looking for him as he has dissapeared. His parent's will be worried.

Reviewer: Ghostbuster5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Aaaw. See? Why can't the giantess be friends with the shrunken guy?



Author's Response: They are. At least for now........

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

To paraphrase the immortal words of M'sieur Rick of Casablanca: "Melony? This looks like the beginning of a beautiful friendship."

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