Reviews For Sweat & Tears
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Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

I wanted to make an addendum to my previous review to say that how you've crafted Alex's character into being a possessive lover to the point of being dominant is really well done. I also like how you've written from Joe's perspective that he's constantly uneasy with Alex's scent around but then we see him becoming attracted to it more and more. I imagine it makes this story immersive even for someone who doesn't already have olfactophilia.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Really like this story. Thanks for posting it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

I don't see her as evil/oblivious. Just nervous somebody would take away the one person who ever really loved her.



Author's Response:

You're absolutely correct with that interpretation. I'm glad that apparently got across already.

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