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Reviewer: acuteoblique Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like the slow shrinking.  It is also great that she doesn't even realize that he's significantly below normal height. I hope she's into short guys (and takes a shower before he gets too small =)



Author's Response:

Hm, I didn't really explain this in the story, but, in my mind at least, Alex doesn't entirely forego showering. Rather she's just kinda absentminded and doesn't see them as a priority, so she does it when she remembers and has nothing else to do (maybe once a week). But since she's always doing physical activity and has no qualms with wearing used clothing over and over, the effects are pretty short-lived.

Anyway thanks!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

 

I hope the form a deeper friendship. I can't wait till Alex actually realizes he is striking lol. In the next ch or so can u maybe add in some actual foot worship? I know its hard because he seems to stay away from her feet even though he likes her socks lol. His love for her smell grows deeper lol. Keep up the good work :) "Feed Me More!"



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'll definitely be writing in more feet stuff. I made him gradually more accepting of her smell until he suddenly liked it and craved it since I like the idea of it having that secondary effect besides just shrinking, and it keeps him exposed to it and shrinking more (if only he knew it was the cause). And I like the parallel of growing to love her smell -> growing to love her. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

Keep going as you are going.

 

This is an amazing story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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