Reviews For Sweat & Tears
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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great start.

Very good set-up for what's to come.

I love slow shrinking with the femdom element.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, there will be more action from here on out.

Reviewer: sketch Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice so far.  I'm a fan of "sporty girls" having known a few, and I can hear their voice in Alex.

So will we learn why her sweat odor causes him to shrink, or will it be a "it just does" story mechanic?



Author's Response:

Thanks. I did think about it, but I don't really have a reason for why it causes him to shrink. Pheromones etc but no real reason, because I don't want it to be an effect she has on everyone. Personally, the mechanics of shrinking/growth aren't very important when I'm reading a story like this. I know some people do. It's not a science fiction story and I don't intend to get into it when I've already spent a lot of text setting up the characters and all. Sorry.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

 

is there going to be some sweaty foot action? that would be cool. also how small do u plan on him getting? nothing is better then having a 2ft servant around the house! :)



Author's Response:

Yes there will be feet, probably my favorite aspect of the fetish so for sure there will be. I don't want to say exactly how small, but smaller than 2 ft. But it's a gradual shrinking process so there will be time spent w/ each size on the way down...

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