Date: September 19 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great start.
Very good set-up for what's to come.
I love slow shrinking with the femdom element.
Author's Response:
Thanks, there will be more action from here on out.
Date: September 19 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice so far. I'm a fan of "sporty girls" having known a few, and I can hear their voice in Alex.
So will we learn why her sweat odor causes him to shrink, or will it be a "it just does" story mechanic?
Author's Response:
Thanks. I did think about it, but I don't really have a reason for why it causes him to shrink. Pheromones etc but no real reason, because I don't want it to be an effect she has on everyone. Personally, the mechanics of shrinking/growth aren't very important when I'm reading a story like this. I know some people do. It's not a science fiction story and I don't intend to get into it when I've already spent a lot of text setting up the characters and all. Sorry.
Date: September 19 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
is there going to be some sweaty foot action? that would be cool. also how small do u plan on him getting? nothing is better then having a 2ft servant around the house! :)
Author's Response:
Yes there will be feet, probably my favorite aspect of the fetish so for sure there will be. I don't want to say exactly how small, but smaller than 2 ft. But it's a gradual shrinking process so there will be time spent w/ each size on the way down...