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Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: The man of the house

I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 3: The man of the house

Awesome chapter. Love all the things Fanny has done. Really a great chapter. I am surprised that he does not answer her with yes ma'am. He should look up at her when she speaks to him. Well done describing her hand and fingers slowly wrapping him up despite his banging.
Love it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, i really appreciate it. Regarding the "yes ma'am" thing, bear in mind that i am from Argentina and english is not my native language. I am not very familiarized with the term, i have never read it or heard it in any context other than this site and i don't even know how it sounds, for long time i thought that the word "ma'am" stood for "mom / mother" and i realized that it wasn't like that one week ago after reading your previous review and searching the term meaning on internet.

Reviewer: Crocodile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 3: The man of the house

I like how callous everyone is with him.  Great job!!!

Reviewer: Tiny0604 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 3: The man of the house

God, this is great! But too short! Please, continue, i want more!

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