[Report This]Date: March 23 2014 12:23 AM Title: There is a party tonight and you are invited.
Best story I have read in quite a long time really would love to see an update
-Love
Chloe
Date: August 29 2012 9:20 PM Title: The Tournament is Over
I really hope she makes the cupcakes then puts the people in the frosting or hollows out the cupcakes. If she puts them in the batter they'll get cooked, and where's the fun in eating tiny people if you can't hear their screams?
Date: August 26 2012 12:25 PM Title: There is a party tonight and you are invited.
Really good writing quality, for me thats the main component to read a story on this site. Also the story is so intriguiging to the point that I can't stop reading.An added bonus to your story is making me feel for the characters so much that I cringe wen one is killed or punished, especially Dom. Overall great work, I hope you keep it coming!
[Report This]Date: August 24 2012 5:22 PM Title: Mortal Combat
Monie REALLY needs to kill Archie.
Author's Response:
Haha I'm a little disappointed in myself for having a cliche asshole. I do try the very hardest I can to steer away from cliches, but sometimes it's very hard.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2012 11:52 AM Title: New Master
Gotta admit Im curious whats gonna happen. This story is getting good
Author's Response:
Yes! A review! Don't go anywhere. This story is not over yet. Plus I have something big planned for Dom Flash.
Date: July 19 2012 11:34 PM Title: There is a party tonight and you are invited.
Looking forward to that vore you promised (pelease no chewing for some reason I detest maiming of the victim before swallowing)I like that you keep me interested in the characters even when there isn't any major size-related action going on. Though I'm glad to see that it is. I am not really a feet crush kind of person but I understand most on this site are so I can foregive it as a neccesary sin to please the crowd and/or yourself. But please continue can't wait to see what she does to him when she remebers he owes her cupcakes. Maybe use his friends as cupcakes instead lol :)
Date: July 18 2012 2:25 PM Title: There is a party tonight and you are invited.
I really like the premise, hopefully there will be some good vore.
Date: July 18 2012 1:39 PM Title: There is a party tonight and you are invited.
A catching beginning you can easily relate to the main character. I forsee some foot,breast, or maybe even stomach or ass time in the future of Nick with Sarah, do I not?
Author's Response:
I am still in the process of deciding the future of Nick and Sarah. I don't know if I want them seperate to the main story or part of it.