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Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2012 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

its ok but its really short and u need to split ur paragraphs etc

Reviewer: LittlestGuy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked the story. Thanks.

Reviewer: andymich65 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story. looking forward for more

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