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Reviewer: Samius Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 10:16 PM Title: The Beginning

I liked this story. you have a solid narrative here,

Make sure you put at least one blank line between your paragraphs to make it easier for the reader.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2014 4:06 AM Title: The Beginning

Hello Mr Tiny. What a surprise to see your comment on a strory so far back!  Many thanks.  As you have noticed, I haven't written much more recently for this particular site, but have done for two others which I doubt whether you'd be interested in. Both sites cater for the similar scenarios as Gtsworld but not tiny males. As explained in my bio, I much prefer the prey (male) to be fully-sized, but I still love the thought of being shrunk and inserted in either depositories...three actually....which you can guess. Just imagine you given the choice...which one would you choose?

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