Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 2:54 PM Title: Hit the Showers

not really my type of story, so i won't leave a rating, but objectively i'm just going to note that your spelling/grammar are in such a state of disarray that any reading this might be tempted to belittle it for shoddy workmanship. i would highly suggest combing through for errors if you want to be taken seriously, bud.