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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 9:48 AM Title: Coming To

nice start

Reviewer: Mictivle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2012 9:36 PM Title: Coming To

I love the switching of views as well, especially combined with the unaware.  It looks to be a good start, and you do a nice job of describing the size difference.

Reviewer: Knot Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2012 1:16 PM Title: Coming To

Excellent start. I enjoy the back and forth style, alternating points of view. I look forward to seeing where you take this!

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