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Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 10:02 PM Title: Prologue

Great sequel. Belena's first encounter with Lorek rubbed me exactly the right way. Also, Valdan and Sylvie are totes adorbz.

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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2016 6:07 AM Title: Prologue

Excellent adventure and love stories between brother and giantess sister, giantess and lover. What's sad is that Valdan seems to dislike his older sister because of Sylvie. His older sister is a saint.
Sylvie is just a child and a brat. Not evil, but her actions will have far reaching consequences on how Valdan look at giants. I just don't see him fully embrace his sisters. Tolerate them a little more than before, but I see no love.
It's good that Belena gets to rule instead of Valdan or Sylvie. Lorek is a lucky guy.

 

 

Reviewer: amsting9023 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 10:35 AM Title: Prologue

I admit, I was hesitant to read this because I knew it wouldn't be Alban and Valerie's story.  But reading each chapter, I was amazed again! Malaka writes such astounding characters, great arcs, and the budding romance between Belena and Lorek is so heartwarming.  Valdan and Sylvie's arc is great as well; you feel for Valdan who feels out of place in a family of giant women.  Sylvie is a young, albeit immature giantess who loves picking on her brother, but grows at towards the end as she really cares for him.  We get to see the neighboring mountain tribes, snow trolls and wyverns.  Another greatly written story Malaka!

Reviewer: ramen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 3:45 PM Title: Prologue

Hands down, one of my favorite giantess stories of all times. I've emailed Malaka and let him know how much I really loved this story, but felt kind of guilty for never having actually created an account here to rate it publically. I've read many of Malaka's works (such as Woods, Girl Like Me, etc) and have enjoyed them all... but I really loved both Princess of Vandan, and especially Children. The characters are great, and just jump off the page... as is the story. I'm glad Malaka will continue with these characters in a new story, with Belena and Lorek getting married, and Sylvie now more mature and grown up. Who knows, maybe Sylvie will find herself a boyfriend, too! (hint, hint). At any rate, I've really enjoyed Malaka's works -- especially these characters -- and thought it's about time I added my 5 stars to it as well... :) I'll check back in a few months so I can read a larger chunk once Malaka has had time to write more for Chronicles of Vandan... as well as the few other stories of his I haven't yet read. Thanks, Malaka, for all of your great stories!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2013 12:57 AM Title: Prologue

This has such a sweet and fantastic story, I adore the parts with Belena and Lorek. I hope that you will continue this story, onward and beyond. I feel that this story has so much plot and potential that it'd be a waste to stop writing or discontinuing it. Please make more chapters!



Author's Response:

I would really love to continue this story, the problem is it's just one of many stories I want to write! I'll have to prioritise somehow, but it's difficult. What I want to write changes from one week to the next.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 7:41 PM Title: Prologue

This was one of the stories I read per update so I'm glad you summed it up nicely! Im hoping that you don't just abandon these characters though, there is plenty of potential for more adventures here!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 9:02 PM Title: Prologue

I like this story, a bit abrupt in Sylvie's adventure with Valdan but Belenda's story was touching, her anger at Prince Argo was understandable and probably what Valerie went through with Alban some years back.

 

 Really touching to see Lorek and Belenda together, the latter can marry anyone due to her size and the prosperity of the kingdom meaning she does not need to marry for the security of the country or her future but can choose according to her heart. 

 

  I want to do a fantasy story but it can never seem to take off like yours do, Tales from the First Age merits a sequel, I want to see more of the massive giantess that saved the town( Was her name Gia, read too long ago!) and perhaps her budding romance with a man the size of a dot to her, would something so one sided work out? I need more!



Author's Response:

Great review, thanks a lot! I have an idea for a sequel to First Age, with Gailina returning, but it remains to be seen whether I'll get round to writing it or not. I'm also going to read The Escape and its sequel now, so I'll leave a review. Finally, iI'd love to see you write a fantasy story someday, since I love reading those kinds of stories. Good luck!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 1:08 AM Title: Prologue

Please continue this story, I'm a big fan of all your other stories, and I hope you write this one out till it ends, like in a girl like me :). Good luck.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll definitely give it a shot soon.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2013 5:41 AM Title: Prologue

you misunderstood my question. I meant that i have an idea for a new story but it would be much better if you wrote it. Does that sound good to you?

Author's Response:

Sorry for misunderstanding, but yeah, if you have an idea you're welcome to send it to me. I can't promise that I'll get round to it immediately, but I'll definitely give it a look!

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 4:37 PM Title: Prologue

about my idea. The character I thought of would be able to get out of her boot without trouble. He could pretend to pass out in there so she would check on him and once she takes him ou he dashes towards her shoulders and hides in her hair. Or he could use a knife he carries for self defense to cut a hole in her boot and sneak out to scare her(somehow). But it doesnt matter wether you decide to put my character in or not the story is cool anyway

Author's Response:

It's a good idea, but I've decided to end the story soon in any case, and begin writing a new one. Also, I'm planning on having Sylvie become a more likeable character in the near future, so there's no need for her to 'get a dose of her own medicine', as it were ;-)

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 1:06 PM Title: Prologue

I'm continuing to really enjoy your work in this tale.  As usual, character development and fluidity come first for you, though the giantess bits are obviously very enticing as well.  I also look forward to seeing some of your other works continue. *cough* 3rd Fairytale Romance story *cough*



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review! I have thought of doing another Fairytale story, but I can't seem to get an idea that I really like. (And I've been through a lot of ideas, lol!) Maybe I'll think of something this year, now that I know people like you want to see more, haha!

Reviewer: pkong Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2013 12:32 PM Title: Prologue

I'm glad to see your updating this story again. I Just wanted to
say that you are officially one of my favorite authors on this site.
As much as I love the sexy, I enjoy a story well told even more and
your stories have very believable characters and worlds.


I also like the way you use giant children in your stories. I
think kids make for very interesting characters, because they can be
cruel and immature without seeming evil and yet can be kindhearted as
well. Sylvie is a great example, shes a spoiled brat who see's small
people as as toys, yet shes kind enough to not really want to harm
them. I like seeing them try to find their places in the world and I
love seeing them interact with tiny adults. I wish there was more
interaction between them and their tiny father. Its hard enough being
the father of normal sized teenagers.


Speaking of Sylvie I'm looking forward to seeing what happened
after that cliffhanger you left. On one hand Sylvie seems to need to
learn a lesson about bullying tiny people and her brother. On the
other hand its seems like she does that because she thinks her
brother doesn't love her. That would be his fault, its an older
brothers duty to play with his sister (willingly) which it seems he's
failed at.


I can’t wait to see how that family drama plays out and I
commend you for making characters that I actually feel the need to
analyze. Keep up the good writing!

 



 



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the compliments, they're greatly appreciated. I do regret not using Alban more in the story and making him a sort-of 'absent father' figure unintentionally, but its really more the kids' story, not his.

As to Sylvie, the way she treated Valdan began when she was very little and not old enough to know better. It was understandable then, but she did not grow out of that mindset as she should have, and by then Valdan was already alienated from her. Still, there is hope lying ahead!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 12:58 AM Title: Prologue

its crazy i feal the same thing coming from the characters

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 6:28 PM Title: Prologue

Very much enjoying this. I especially like the playfully antagonistic relationship between Valdan and Sylvie, it's fun and domineering without resorting to overt sadistic themes; it allows the story to stay with the "gentle" theme while still exploring other types of relationships. Quite good, keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: supernatural Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 6:02 PM Title: Prologue

good start lets hope the two princesses dont decide they should over throw any one

Reviewer: Strongkobayashi85 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 2:16 PM Title: Prologue

As always a very nice start into a new chapter of your stories^^

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2012 10:20 PM Title: Prologue

Wow, my last story inspired you to write again? I'm flattered. I hope you enjoyed it. Please leave a review if you get the chance.

I'm fine with this not being a fetish story. I just meant that some of us giantess fans tend to fetishize the idea in our minds even when a story or scenario is not intended as such. I was wondering about the age of the characters so I would know if I should turn that part of my brain off and just enjoy this as a story.



Author's Response:

Belena will be aged twelve in the first two chapters, but for most of the story she'll be eighteen. There won't be any really risque scenes later on, just a few little scenes here and there - but I haven't really thought that far ahead!

PS: I've reviewed The Wasteland.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2012 12:59 AM Title: Prologue

Awesome to see you continuing this. I enjoyed the first story and had hoped to see more with these characters. The giant sisters and normal-sized brother should provide an interesting angle for this one.

I too am wondering how far ahead you will jump. Hopefully, they won't be underage for too long or the GTS fetish-y side of my mind will feel a bit uncomfortable. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was reading the conclusion of your last story that made me want to write again, so I decided to try this tale, and I hope it'll be fun.

There'll be a few early chapters where they're still children, but most of the chapters will focus on the kids in their late teens. This won't really be a fetish story, but I'm hoping you'll like it.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2012 12:43 AM Title: Prologue

Wow, so they managed to have children. That must have been awkward for Alban - actually perish the thought. It's nice to see you writing again.



Author's Response:

Actually, I think Alban quite enjoyed it. Wouldn't you? :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2012 11:04 PM Title: Prologue

interesting. wonder how many years ahead you will start chapter one(if at all). havent read an adventure/gts story in awhile an im looking forward to it.
an glad to see your name pop up once again.

aaron
ps im working on a story of my own(should be out in a few days/weeks)

Author's Response:

Chapter one is almost done, but I'll wait a bit before I post it, and write chapter two first. Thanks for reviewing, and good luck with your story!

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