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Reviewer: kadenator Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

I was wondering if in the next story will there still be foot play and what not? also will Jenny make a reappearance? because if I remember correctly she told Jack that if anything happened to Carly he'd be in serious trouble with her... well something happened to Carly. so please respond and I can't wait for the next story



Author's Response:

Glad you like the story. Because Jack was rescued from Carly at the end of 3, the foot stuff won't be as intensive, but it will definitely still be there.  Jenny won't be appearing in 5, though I do address what happened to her in a different one of my stories.

Reviewer: Jamilton Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

I haven't read the story yet but I want to say well done cause it looks like you put a lot of time and effort into that story. How long did it take you to write it?

Author's Response:

Thanks; I've been writing it on-and-off since 2011.

Reviewer: kadenator Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

when do you think the fifth story will come out? other than that question I just wanted to say I love the stories keep it up



Author's Response: It probably won't be for a while because I've got other stories I want to work on first but I am planning on it. I appreciate your interest.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Interesting chapter, and that cool how there will be a "Blackmail 5."



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: RMWALA Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

Nice, really nice chapter. Lots of stories I read just for the giantess action, but this is one of the few that I really care about the characters and the story. Can't wait for the fifth installment. 



Author's Response:

I appreciate hearing that. I hope the 5th will live up to that care for the story.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Julia while equal to our antagonist here kind of deserves to go down for her actions. 

 

However I can't help but wish Carly -had- won, I mean Jack while still a person was way less deserving of freedom than the faithful people kept in that room under Julia.

 

Basically there's just something about Carly that makes you while knowing she's terrible for what she's done still remain able to do it.

Great stuff.



Author's Response:

Wow, Carly's convinced you she deserves her freedom, huh? She's even more persuasive than I thought!

Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Excellent look into Carly's mind. It gives us a great description of her thoughts and mindset.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Nice preview of his problems, Jack will need a ton of therapy in Blackmail 5 to get over what Carly put him through, just wondering if there will be any big girl- little guy interaction in that one? 



Author's Response:

"A ton" is probably an understatement. Thanks for reading! And even though it won't be Carly messing with Jack, there will certainly be big-little action.

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

Another awesome entry man. Hey something ive a;ways wondered is what carly and jack look like. Are they any celebrities you have in mind that could give us maybe more of a visual representation?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing.  I don't have a real-life visual for Jack since I usually assume the reader will just project onto him, but Carly's look is based on several different people I know.  I will see if I can come up with the closest celebrity approximation though.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

That was a great chapter. Carly is such a cool character.

 Sure Jack would rather have his old life back. But look at all the adventuurs he gets to go on because of his sister...lol

Please more Carly and Jack stuff soon. These are the best stories on this site.

Dave



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading man.  And really, who could want a normal life back when he gets to do all this fun stuff?  There will be more Carly and Jack once I've gotten closer to finishing my other stories.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

Mm, cherry tart, it's Massic-lly delicious!  Didn't that silly rabbit say something like that?  ;`)



Author's Response:

Oh, god, the puns.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

Wow, loved Valentine's day.  The perfect balance of roughness for me, not so brutal but completely domineering.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

Carly just has a way at making everything she does no matter how mundane, humiliating or even dangerous just so damn amazing.

Looking forward to part five my good man.



Author's Response:

Thanks man.  Carly's one of my favorites to write.  I swear part 5 is coming someday, probably once I'm closer to ending one of my unfinished stories.

Reviewer: Ackbar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

I can't help but be overly amused at Carly pretending she didn't already have her valentine picked out the moment she woke up.



Author's Response:

Very astute, although it just wouldn't be Carly without the over-elaborate show being put on, would it?

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

I"m thrilled to see you writing Carly and Jack again. Great chapter. I'm really looking forward to part 2.

Dave



Author's Response:

Thanks man.  I've already got part 2 mostly done so that will pop up in the near future.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

A Little Blackmail 5? Probably a chapter that deals with Jack attempting to be cured whilst trying to get hiis life nack on track.Carly would probably be facing jail time for what she did to him there. 



Author's Response:

You're definitely on the right track there, though there will be a few twists thrown into that mix as well.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: hotoh34 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

I like how you had a special valentines chapter to this story. You should try considering other "special events" like maybe jacks bday or carlys bday, thanksgiving, summer break, or maybe like the anniversary of when jack first shrank haha. Great chapter as usual glad to see this series back on its feet :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I've considered events like the ones you listed before. I'm saving the Thanksgiving setting for a different story, but the birthday concept is a strong possibility. And actually, the anniversary of Jack shrinking is a chapter I have planned for down the road...

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

Carly is awesome. Great chapter as usual. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

'more suspicious than a schizophrenic in a dark alley on acid', That's pretty suspicious Jack!  Ha!

I had nearly forgotten about this one...  Nice update, I wonder who she'll choose to be her Valentine?  Carly's so sweet... god love her!  ;`)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  And yes, she is so sweet, what with all the kidnapping and foot sodomy and whatnot...

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