Reviews For The Caretaker
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2011 7:28 AM Title: At her feet
Date: August 13 2011 7:28 AM Title: At her feet
You do need to double-check your spelling and capitalization a bit more often, though.
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2011 7:24 AM Title: At her feet
Date: August 13 2011 7:24 AM Title: At her feet
I agree with Scrumptious. You're off to an action-packed start, here. And, I feel it's better to have a good, fast-paced sm-novella with even a mediocre ending, than a long, high-brow sm-novel with no ending at all. The latter should be an occasional exception. Not the frighteningly increasing rule!
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2011 3:06 PM Title: At her feet
Date: August 07 2011 3:06 PM Title: At her feet
awesome. absolutely love this story. an cant wait for another update. an i love the size differences between jake and.. well pretty much anyone lol.
aaron
Author's Response:
hahaha, glad you like it dude