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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2011 7:28 AM Title: At her feet

You do need to double-check your spelling and capitalization a bit more often, though.

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Date: August 13 2011 7:24 AM Title: At her feet

I agree with Scrumptious. You're off to an action-packed start, here. And, I feel it's better to have a good, fast-paced sm-novella with even a mediocre ending, than a long, high-brow sm-novel with no ending at all. The latter should be an occasional exception. Not the frighteningly increasing rule!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2011 3:06 PM Title: At her feet

awesome. absolutely love this story. an cant wait for another update. an i love the size differences between jake and.. well pretty much anyone lol.

aaron

Author's Response:

hahaha, glad you like it dude

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