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Reviewer: oishi1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

The overall plot is very good. You created characters that are believable in their own right. There are many grammar issues that make it difficult to follow sometimes. I hope you continue writing. I look forward to reading more from you.

Reviewer: 8cm50 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

That's a cute story !

 

Reviewer: wb2 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank u

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