Reviewer: gerard Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 5:28 PM Title: meeting sian

Greetings Matthew Harris! This is indeed quite a piece of imaginitive work you have produced. Please dont be fooled by the penname, I am certainly not "gerard" but rather one of your former classmates. Seeing youve had a rough couple of years in high school, I guess your work has certainly been a product of this pent up passion and emotion that you had stored, and I must say I am impressed; for a 14 year old this piece is extremely impressive. Aside from the aforementioned poor grammatical and sentence structure (presumably you have now overcome such errors) this work is good, keep it up!

 

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