Date: February 11 2015 5:28 PM Title: meeting sian
Greetings Matthew Harris! This is indeed quite a piece of imaginitive work you have produced. Please dont be fooled by the penname, I am certainly not "gerard" but rather one of your former classmates. Seeing youve had a rough couple of years in high school, I guess your work has certainly been a product of this pent up passion and emotion that you had stored, and I must say I am impressed; for a 14 year old this piece is extremely impressive. Aside from the aforementioned poor grammatical and sentence structure (presumably you have now overcome such errors) this work is good, keep it up!
Regards,
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[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 9:32 PM Title: sians gumball
will be tuning in for the next chapters to see what happens next..
aaron
Author's Response:
it will be out soon im having a little trouble revising for an exam so progress is rather slow but thank you :)