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Reviewer: Shrunken Guy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Roberts Experience

Wow

Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2006 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Roberts Experience

A very good story BigAl and well written. It would make me want to cimmit a crime if I lived in such a society. Do they also use very mature plump women for the worst crimes? Heh heh.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Stanley! I'm sure there could be some 'mature plump women' somewhere on the list of volunteers!!

Reviewer: nostromo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2006 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Roberts Experience

hey, nice story, good plot and the double point of view is really effective! Thanks a lot!

Author's Response: Thanks Nostromo! Much appreciated! As I said in the intro, I'm not a particularly creative writer, but I've certainly been given a few ideas of what works from the excellent stories on this site!

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