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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 03 2021 2:05 PM Title: Minding the store

Uh-oh! Can you say "kleptomaniacal confiscation?"

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 4:49 PM Title: Minding the store

He sighs with relief, but what if Natilie doesn't find him in the cabinet. I think the mom needs some time with him. You could use similar dialogue that you use for Alex. Alex sounds like a MILF. I thought only moms say darling. I guess not.

Maybe Katie's parents take him. Lots of possibilities here. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 2:43 PM Title: Minding the store

Well, if this were Writing.com, the next installment would go one of three ways. Unwitting abduction by an older woman working at the pet store; miraculous opportunity for escape presents itself and is successfully seized; or, he is captured in the middle of the escape, by an adult woman customer, and bought.*

*The latter transaction would probably be handled by the adult cashier while Natalie was on break. Ergo, she wouldn't know about the sale until it was too late.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 11:10 AM Title: Shocking Turns

"Now what??"

Now, you remain shrunken for the rest of your life. Which will probably end in the very next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol very well set up, Cary but since when do I gruesomely kill off my characters? Then again, perhaps I'm due 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 11:20 AM Title: Shocking Turns

Bobby was so close! Now he's stuck tiny for more time with a girl with crazy moodswings! I suppose he should be thankful she's nice most of the time.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 16 2014 12:46 PM Title: Night Terrors

Sleep-rape???!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2014 12:09 PM Title: Night Terrors

Natalie is has some powerful mood swings doesnt she? One minute shes a great, caring girl and the next shes forcefully raping a helpless man! Shes hella inconsistent, if I were Bobby I would have bailed! Anyway, im glad your updating this, its my favorite of your stories by far!

Reviewer: Ripstar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 2:42 AM Title: Unexpected Kindness

I do like the story so far.  I would like to see more Alexis parts or more like it, and expanded if possible.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 8:30 AM Title: Unexpected Kindness

Uh-oh! Baby-sitting a pet store? That definitely bodes ill (ALWAYS wanted to say that!) for Our Little Hero.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2013 2:10 PM Title: Dinner Time Conversation

I'm hoping it's the Mom! :-)

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 7:03 PM Title: The beginning

Amazing story!  Your perspective is quite impressive.  Nicely detailed, and very involving as the progression developes.  Playfully flagitous giantess' are realistic and natural...

The suspence continues in every chapter... I hope Mom captures him, maybe she'll have some place to keep him safe from the dog?

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 7:06 AM Title: Escaping Alex

Love to see this story updated. Love the new chapter. Is this a new brginning for him and Nat or will it be the end. Cannot wait to see where you go from her. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 5:34 PM Title: Escaping Alex

Any man who says he doesn't like two women fighting over him is either a liar, a hentai, or both!

Great cat-fight action, dude. :-)

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 6:38 PM Title: The beginning

Wonderful story,This new chapter takes it to a whole nother level.  I love alex, Can't wait to see what she has in store for him if he survived.  Great story hope to see much more!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 6:27 PM Title: Boy Toy

Seriously, though; you obviously decided to go the traditional route, after all.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 6:25 AM Title: Boy Toy

Great chapter.

aaron

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 10:28 PM Title: The beginning

Been waiting for this one to come back, its been a fav of mine for a while now...

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 8:17 PM Title: The beginning

You would not believe how happy I am that this story is finally back, after all this time.

9 stars, for sure!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 6:41 PM Title: Boy Toy

OK, guys! Take five while I go for a glass of some ICE-OCLD water.

;-)

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2013 6:52 AM Title: Letting It All Out

Great story, I wonder if Nat is falling in love. I hope so. For the first time I am rooting for these two to become a couple.

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