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Reviewer: HiddenAuthor Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Could you perhaps do a second chapter? Maybe have Lady Minerva have William play at her table or start "loving" like a pet bird? The setup is good but it seems that the story is nothing more than a setup!

Author's Response: please refer to chapter end notes :)

Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sucks to be that guy.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow... this was surprisingly deep. well done.

aaron
lol, the chapter notes. an it wasnt clear at all.

Author's Response: Well i wanted to keep it short, and thought description of the world around him was unnecessary. And thank you

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loosely based on Maya Angelou's I KNOW WHY THE SHRUNKEN MAN SINGS.*

*Sorry: couldn't resist. Definitely two thumbs' up, though! :-)

Author's Response: hmm, I've never heard of that but thanks anyway

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