Reviews For The Breakup
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh no! I hope the punishment is nothing too harsh. Good chaper though.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

so many questions... damn im hooked.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well, if he's half the macho idiot I think he is, they'll probably try to demean with having him paint their toe nails (or something equally "girlie").

Although, as he seems to be only an inch or two tall now, it's going to be truly a Herculean effort for him!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

Fantastic Chapter. This was a marked improvement on the Chip/dip scene in "Honey we shrunk ourselves."

I hope he ends up in her mum's mouth for a while at least.

Author's Response: Thats not actually where i got this idea, it started with another giantess named katelyn brooks and one of her videos. thx for the review.

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