Reviews For The Breakup
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is interesting. A few gramtical errors, noticably the use of "could" isntead of "couldn't". However, I still enjoyed it. On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: andymich65 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story. you should have some foot teasing. btw i loved the unaware parts

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Shrunk by Lily, and soon to be over-fondled by Jasmine. This guy's gonna be allergic to all flowers before this story ends! ;-)

Author's Response: lol i didnt even think of that

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey great story. I'm on the edge in my seat anticipating the next enticing chapter...

The 'giantess fetish' part that you added was fantastic...

Aaron

Author's Response: new chaper~

Reviewer: The Critic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like where this story is going, it's well written, easily presented, and easy to read. I also like it due to the fact it features one of my favorite categories, 'Mouth Play'. Would love to see some 'Insertion' later, or even 'Butt Insertion'. Looking forward to Chapter 2.

Author's Response: new chapter~

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