Date: April 26 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Before you read my review know that I am in no way trying to flatter you, this is my honest opinion:
Your story is by far the best giantess story I have read. I even credit this as the reason I have stayed into this genre. I came across it about two years ago, and I believe it was one of the first that I opened on this website. In one sitting I found myself finishing the most recent chapter (which was chapter 12 at the time) and I as already looking forward to the next.
I appreciate all of the effort you have put forth into this story despite the fact that I imagine you have little obligation to do so. Parental Myrmidon is a major highlight in the website and a privilege to all the members in this community. Thank you for writing this story. Thank you for submitting this story.
I hope that you find inspiration to continue and complete this story with many chapters inbetween. Whether or not that you do, I will happily continue to check on and reread the work that you have already donated to us.
Date: October 04 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've bookmarked the few gems that come along on this site, mainly from the likes of Stanley Williams and others who incorporate more snuff in their stories. First person is okay if the person is witnessing the death of another person. That kind is sexy.
But, I'm moving away from giantess stories in general to stories that are more believable as you want more substance as you get older. Stories with life-sized participants involved in realistic scenarios that simply get out of hand ending with someone dead or seriously maimed. But thats a rant for another time and place.
I guess its prt of growing up.
Date: October 03 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
there is so little that can be done to the characters with all the first person perspective. its like: they are just telling what they see, and if they never die, then you just end up repeating variations of the same formula over and over in each chapter. that gets old after the 6th chapter of the same formula...
a story should really stand out, and first person ones like this are a dime a dozen on here, but at least don't drone on and on. oh well, you're not getting paid for it, so its no big deal. but knowing there won't be any snuff and that the outcome is going to be the same year after year, im done reading it. you will not have to worry about anymore of my critiquing since i already know the end of the story. basically, the characters are having a really bad dream and everyone turns out fine...goodbye
Author's Response:
If thats what you truly think is going to happen, you havent read the story that closely. As there have already been more then enough clues to prove that isnt going happen. How does the fact if someone dies change anything about the story. You yourself said first person perspective is just variations of the same theme and these stories are a dime a dozen and your looking for unique stories why are you here at all? Every story on this website is a rehash of something already done. Every author here is just putting there own spin on a idea already done. There is only so many things you can do with a shrunken man or giant woman. How many stories out there are written in first person with people dying? literally hundreds. Yet you chose to read a story that didnt even have crush in the title and wonder why people werent dying. That is like going to a romance movie and wondering when the war scene is going to start.
It's your choice not to read my story, but you dont have to belittle my craft to do it.
Date: October 01 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
very dissappointing story. the story is just too drawn out and long for the lack of any climactic actions in it. i could see if the husband was watching the wife get killed or something. its like the author waits 2 months to move ahead 5 minutes in the story.
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you have been asking for this for months and i have told you nicely multiple times im not going to kill the main characters of the story in the middle of the story. It would be like reading harry potter and JK Rowling saying lets have harry potter die in the first book and have hermonie watch. What would happen for the rest of the book? As far as story chapter production goes, i write in my free time sometimes i have more free time then others. It's not like im getting paid to write this story. I just write it for fun. I am sorry if there isnt enough killing or the story isnt moving along fast enough for you. However no where did i say the character were going to be killed and i can only work as fast as life allows me too. thanks for reading upto this point though and your comments and criticisms are appreciated.
Author's Response:
Date: August 26 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Seems that the last entry was in 2010. I take it there won't be any new installments for this series?
Author's Response:
the story was just updated last week. It was published in 2010.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: February 06 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want death, preferably of the mother at the foot or ass of her own daughter.
Author's Response:
well if any of the characters would die, it would most likely be the climax of the story. It doesnt do that well to kill your main characters of the story before that point.
Date: January 16 2012 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
are you tiny jackson on giantess shrine?
Author's Response:
no, can't say that i am. This website is the only giantess website i go too.
Date: September 12 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT!! one of the best on this site!!
Author's Response:
Thanks my friend, i hope you enjoy the rest.
[Report This]Date: July 26 2011 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
awesome! trapped in her converse and going to work with her hehe.. Keep em coming! :)
Author's Response:
yup, one of my favorite segments.
Date: July 14 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love the wine drinking part
[Report This]Date: June 23 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
really really really great, lol, your a great writer
Date: June 08 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story, plz keep the chapters coming
Author's Response:
I try to do chapters as often as i can, but it doenst always work out. Im trying hard to complete the story as i hate incomplete stories myself so idont want to do that to my readers.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story! I'm glad you're continuing with it. Love the shoe/sock interactions.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, there will be more foot scenes to be had.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome new chapter! :)
[Report This]Date: May 27 2011 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
forgot to rate haha
Date: May 27 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love where this story is going :). Hopefully there will be some katharine sandal/slipper action lol. And I'm g;ad Chelsea's coming back. They're both see evil haha
Date: May 17 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad you're back man! more Chelsea please! lol :P
Author's Response:
chelsea has a part a bit later
Date: April 08 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'd love for the mother to be destroyed by the daughter and friend...and maybe she take a liking to her father. It dont got to be a sexual liking, but maybe the mom was too bitchy...and the daughter and father really want her out of the way or something.
Maybe add some farting on the mother too!
Date: February 03 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can you add more to this story. I love to see the friend punish the girl's mother severely.