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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

Uhm! Besides the separation problem, you might want to change the nickname of the mer-giantess with the erotically swarthy complexion.

Just a thought.

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