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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved the first chapter and hope you continue this again one day!  i liked how you wrote the girls talking to each other sounded.  it sounded very real like two teenage girls gossiping and living their daily lives

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

excellent start, can't wait to see what you have planned

Author's Response: thx for the response. i've read everyone's stories for years and enjoyed them so much that i thought it was time to give back a little

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 05 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not a bad opener! I hope Stan Williams gets a load of this. This is just his cup of bee's wax. ;-)

Author's Response:

thx Carycomic

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