[Report This]Date: January 31 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
I enjoyed this romp for the most part..lots of rampage and nothing more.
Author's Response: Thanx
[Report This]Date: January 31 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
I enjoyed this romp for the most part..lots of rampage and nothing more.
Date: January 05 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Very well, chomp-chomp, the people in this yarn are miniscule, I'll accept that. If you'd care to read my yarn called "Hundreds an' Thousands" you'll see the victims very small and girls buying them in paper bags and gobbling them up like shrimps; but taken individually, it's more exciting for the readers to visualise the larger sized victims being played with as described in my previous review. Gts's and tiny males can get rather boring when simply swallowing is the only outcome. I still like your choice of a black female and the act of chewing her victim to a pulp. Now that is exciting!
Author's Response: I've already read it, and I must say that I loved it. :)
Date: January 04 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Actually, chomp chomp, I meant for the victims not to be shrunk so small. It would be just that little is hardly credible like so many, many stories depict. A male shrunk to say...4, 5, or even 6 inches would be far more exciting for any female giantess, so that she could play, use and abuse. She could hardly have any pleasure with insignificant sized victims. However, if you cannot bring yourself to such scenarios, then so be it and carry on. Thanks for your reply.
Author's Response:
The Tinies aren't shrunken people but are actually a miniaturized race, I may add a size changing device in later installments though.
P.S every giantess has their own preferences, yes? :)
Date: January 03 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Great story, looking forward to more. I'd love to see more describtion or "warm" memories of what see did to the couple. The possibilities seem endless :). Thanks for the good read.
Author's Response: Thanx :)
Promise the next chapter will be longer & better
with HOT memories lol
Date: January 03 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Well, chomp chomp, years ago such yarns were eagerly read - especially by me because this one has all the ingredients of exciting scenes. The first was that you chose a lovely-looking black female, and then that she chewed up her victims after playing with them although I was disappointed that she failed to insert them in her intimate orifices. But notwithstanding the lack of those actions, you did write a good yarn, and perhaps you might add those "insertion" scenes in your next work; and may I add that the "tinies" are not so tiny so that the gts will have more sexual satisfaction?
Author's Response: I'll take it into consideration
but I'm not sure about growing the Tinies