Reviewer: repaidon Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2024 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The First Night

Really good story so far. I’ve got a few suggestions:

Jenna gets cocky against James and intimidates him, after they’re done with their visit something goes wrong and James is unable to transform back, another strong and tall woman arrives on the island and gives James trouble, the island staff is secretly evil, Lisa is forcing Richard to stay small.

Author's Response:

Thank you and I really like the suggestions! Definitely given me some ideas and some of these elements may already be coming...