Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was fantastic! Cali thinking she was safe only to realize she was anything but. Had me fooled after Ava told her to trust her, I was thinking she was going to keep her for more escapades. Wow. Just awesome. Hope there is a second part, would love to see what she does with the deans daughter ;)

Reviewer: GoodbyeGlass Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Delightful read! I was really in the edge of my seat, wondering whether Ava would go through with it or not! Very hot, very well written! 

Do you think Ava intended to eat her all along? Or was it something subliminal in Cali that made her hyper focus on the water drinking? From Ava's dialogue I think the latter, but I'm not sure!