[Report This]Date: January 03 2024 2:47 AM Title: Complaint
Nice! Very nicely done. Not sure if you made a grammatical mistake or if the terms "thong" and "tongue" were purposely exchanged as part of the story plot. Regardless, very well done {you must be good at chess markmueller}.
Would be nice if Rachel puts Chris back in her thong for a while, or at least during Rachel and Ivy's love making. Removing him the next day covered in ass sweet and butt odor.
As much as I love female butt-hole stories, it seems Chris might be more of an insole for either Ivy or Rachel's shoes, perhaps both, or a living dildo.
You have a terrific story line going on here, though you still have some grammatical issues that are a bit confusing. If you would like, I could proof read your story lines for you. Let me know if you'd like me to.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words.
Would be glad if you coulod help out :)