[Report This]Date: April 25 2024 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man I gotta say I absolutely love this story, from the latest chapters i feel like Jake and Kathlyn will have moment to share their traumas in the future which would be cool to see. Absolutely love your storytelling
[Report This]Date: April 25 2024 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man I gotta say I absolutely love this story, from the latest chapters i feel like Jake and Kathlyn will have moment to share their traumas in the future which would be cool to see. Absolutely love your storytelling
[Report This]Date: January 10 2024 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Jakes in for a loooooong night. Really hope to see Katelyn put Jake through the ringer under her foot. Maybe take him on a date to the trampoline park lol, or maybe Naomi turns from the shy quiet girl to the sadistic dom when she gets ahold of Jake. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Date: November 13 2023 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your story is awsome.
I’m keeping myself to read more.English is not m’y foreign laguage.But you are easy to read.Thank you for your work.And thank you for sharing your hard work with us. [Report This]Date: November 09 2023 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, the horrors Jakey Poo has encountered. Just hoping the wrath of Josephine when and or if she finds Jake will bring justice to his torment.
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: November 08 2023 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh boy, with the introduction of a healing factor. I'm concerned, and interested in the level of new trauma Katelyn is about to introduce to poor Jake.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2023 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
So happy to see this story return!
Not only is the content excellent but the writing is as well. So often, good smut is ruined by poor writing quality, this is not one of those cases. Writing is at least on par with Kickyou who I deem to be one of the best writers of this category of story on this site.
Looking forward to this story's continuation!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG!
Josephine better hurry as Jake is in for a ride he most certainly will not enjoy.
This was a very good chapter and keeps the reader engaged with the characters. You feel anxiety for Jacob and Josephine through this hiccup in their relationship.
It will be interesting to see how Josephine will get Jacob away from Katelyn.
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: November 07 2023 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
With the healing factor being official, my image of a punished Jake has gone to dust. Though there is still the mental scars that he will acquire from Katelyn.
Hope it doesn't go too south for him because I'm not ready to read what you have in store for this great story!
Author's Response:
Interesting times in store for Jake that's for sure.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2023 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is a great chapter and the cliffhanger at the end is tantalizing. I just feel for Josephine when she returns to where she left Jake on the couch. There is a lot of things that will be going through her mind while she tries to figure out where Jake has gone. Until she realizes that Katelyn has him she will assume he ran off somewhere.
During this time Jake had better find a nice place to hide or he will endure more trauma living under the overbearing Katelyn.
I am anticipating and intriguing experience our little Jake will encounter. He will learn just how resilient he truly is.
When and or if he is ever reintroduced to Josephine the trauma he would have endured at the hands of Katelyn will be truly epic.
I am looking forward to the next chapter thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2023 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
How can you leave us with a cliffhanger like that?!?
Loving the story so far! Can’t wait til the next update. Would give 100/10 if I could
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2023 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Another great chapter! Really like that Jake has a quick healing factor, maybe Josephine won’t have to be so careful now.
Author's Response:
Perhaps :) Thank you for the kind words.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2023 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just forgot to rate it so ignore this lol
Date: November 04 2023 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's been a while since a real high-quality story been posted on this website!
Your writing is superb and the way you describe scenes is just amazing! Really excited for the future of this story
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the ride!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2023 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
First my condolences for your loss and send positive vibes your way!
I would like to say I like to do a lot of binge reading rather than read as chapters form as when I find a story that is captivating I don't really enjoy the wait between chapters.
There are occasions I run across stories that are interesting at the start so I read and then find myself at the end of the chapters and then I'm at that point I am like oh crap I am now waiting for the next chapter. This is one of those stories.
These story really touches on situations throughout the chapters that we as a society has not really discussed and delved into for better understanding. The rape scene in the bathroom, the remembering of how Jake was treated when he was a child happens in our society but really never discussed.
Great scenes although dark makes just the little things we do to each other seem mundane but how it affects the other person we just don't truly understand.
There is a lot to unpack in this story but it truly is a Great read and I looking forward to reading more chapter as you post them. This is another one of my favorites.
Author's Response: Firstly, thank you for your condolences. Loss is never easy but a great long life was lived and we will cherish their memory. Second, you're absolutely right about the issues society acknowledges vs the ones society tends to sweep under the rug as it were. I come from a military background and didn't have the best start in life myself, so my writing I feel will always have a dark undertone to it; that being said I've traveled this world and seen all the good there is in it as well. We like Jake, will all have trials and tribulations throughout our lives. How we respond in the best of times determines our perseverance during the worst of them. Appreciate your review Alpha, I'm glad you are enjoying the story thus far.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2023 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was some heavy stuff man and the sad part about it is that abuse like that is more real then people care to admit so I can only thank you for spreading this sad tale to those who needed to hear it
Author's Response:
My pleasure. Thank you for the rating and review.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2023 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another great chapter! Definitely a dark turn, but it adds a lot of depth to Jake.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2023 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely loving this narrative. The relationship between Josephine and Jake is great, but I am also hoping to see Katelyn get ahold of Jake at some point. Very excited to see what that interaction would look like and see how Josephine reacts to it.
Author's Response:
That chapter is coming friend. Just hope I can still get into heaven after I publish that one.
Date: October 10 2023 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! But damn Joes got some serious mood swing issues
Author's Response:
Teenagers amiright?
Date: October 09 2023 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really loving this story so far. Especially the interactions between Jake and Josephine. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!