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Reviewer: Vito Signed star [Report This]
Date: December 17 2009 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Kinda wierd, sick, shocker thing going here, huh?

Author's Response:

Haha Scott felt the same way he stopped e-mailing me for months after he had read it,i think i scared the poor man.

Amanda

Reviewer: Stanley Wlliams Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2009 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked this story, but you need to put more commas into it, and break up the sentences a little more.

Keep woring on it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for words of encouragement,

Amanda.

Reviewer: Andygray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2009 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you Amanda, i realy enjoyed the story, being eaten by a woman i thought i could trust has been one of my fantasys since i was young.xx

Author's Response:

Thank you Andygray glad you liked it after all it was about you.xx.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Tiny Brandon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2009 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another great story amanda, very versitial i like :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you this was a little change for me i shall write womething memorable hopefully before Christmas.

Amanda.

Reviewer: AGrader Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2009 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

The farting and the oven scene are great touches. This is so different to your other stories. It takes disciplining naughty children to a whole new place

Author's Response:

Did i get things moving for you Agrader?i hope so thank you for your kind review.

Amanda.

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