[Report This]Date: November 18 2023 9:07 PM Title: Shes still Growing~
Good stuff!
It's simple, and that simplicity makes it shine out all the more among a lot of things that try to be too much and end up not being good enough in any category.
If I had to critique anything, it would be that Jess' size is often very nebulous, I often didn't have a good feel for it until Veronica started walking on her. And given she's still growing, I feel like I kinda lost it again. This is a small gripe.
Will there be more chapters of this, or is this it? If so, I would love for it to go a lot lewder.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the criticism very much! One of my goals with this short story was to not use any measurements. (Then I still did...) It definitely lost something but I also thought it gained a little bit as well. I definitely could have talked more about the details when Veronica is being held in Jess's hands.