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Reviewer: OrpheusEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2023 7:01 AM Title: At the Movies

Why are all 3 of the ladies in a couple, isn't that like MC Escher style cheating? Good story though, however it feels like it kinda feels generic, Jessica grows, cries, Veronica comforts her, she gets better, repeat. Just pointing that out.

Author's Response:

Three people can share a relationship ^^ and yes the story is terribly vanilla... It is the very first thing I ever wrote. I'm just slowly getting around to editing it and the numerous mistakes the first draft had. But I thought I would share for anybody who wished to read. 

Reviewer: purplereader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2023 4:46 AM Title: At the Movies

A fine read for your first made story. I'm now interested how Katie and Jessica differs and from what they've talked about at the start, it seems that Katie is still growing too.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment! We will be seeing a whole lot more of these three characters... they are my fav~ 

I saw your bio, and I feel and hope you will enjoy my stories... substantially.  

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