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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2023 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice! This is an interesting story. Is it bad I  hope Katie ends up accidently swallowed by one of them, but they think she is in the other. Bonus points if she ends up in the pet food of a cat, that swallows her while they think she is in one of their food.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2023 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very good start already!

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