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Reviewer: Iunno Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2023 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

I just noticed the vore tag. It's over for him huh 



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You'll have to wait and see... anything can happen!

Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2023 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

Am I tripping or did they get much worse lol they seemed to actually feel a lil bit sorry for him by the time they were done with him before



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Seems like being in college changed them for the worse. Or maybe Cynthia was more concerned with saving her own hide back then. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Foxinbox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2023 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

I thought this was just gonna be porn but it turned out to be porn with a plot. The scenarios Kyle is being put into are so hot too, I can't get the foot chapter out of my head prob my favorite so far. Love the story but I hate the girls so damn much like wow they are such terrible people bravo to you and your writing skills Arthur. Heather seems alright but I'll have to wait to see if that remains the case she seems to flip-flop between her sympathy for Kyle and her desires and with the girl's manipulation I don't have much hope. And finally Kyle, my god I feel bad for the dude but fuck me if the situations he's put through aren't hot. He already seems like he has some PTSD and has trust issues now, I can't imagine his mental state will be all that put together by the end of this. Luke seems like a real one tho wish he wasn't such a shit judge of character, can't imagine kyle putting much trust in him after this. No idea where you're gonna take this story but I look forward to it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the in depth review! Really appreciate the effort you put into this. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

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