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Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2023 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Should be "Hayasaka", not "Hayasake"

Author's Response:

Thx, took care of it along with a few other mistakes.

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2023 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Hayasaka

I also really enjoyed the second chapter, but what if Shirogane doesn't regain its original size? I mean Hayasake told him that the shrinking agent will wear off after 24 to 48 hours and he'll be back to normal. But I think the shrinking agent should fail and Shirogane should stay that small forever.

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2023 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start I hope it's a gentle love story and if so then I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.

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