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Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2023 2:09 AM Title: Beginning of A New Life

Howdy. This chapter was awesome! A great start to your series. I love all the dynamics that you are setting up. In particular Juliette and Ava. 

Here are my suggestions for what I would like to see. Please use or don't use any of these as you see fit: Beth finding she enjoys using Layla as a sex toy over Adam; Layla finding she kind of likes being a pet; a nerdy guy being shrunken solely to have Layla sucking his dick and fucking, with her never being allowed to have sex with Adam. 

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2023 12:57 AM Title: Beginning of A New Life

Like it so far! Can't wait for the introduction of other characters. Feel sorry for Adam tho, he seems like a good guy

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2023 1:26 PM Title: Beginning of A New Life

Great beginning to this story, I'm looking forward to what happens next

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