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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2023 1:48 AM Title: A Gentle Giantess Erotica Story

Very nice story so far.  I especially like Daniel's seemingly growing appreciation of Janis, or at least Janis's body.  FTR, it would be great if she did breast feed him with her perk tits; but the story line as you noted has already been written.  So it is what it is.

It's funny to see little Daniel getting stoned from Janis's second hand smoke.  I like that Daniel was kept in Janis's bong as she got stoned {Did you know there is a scene in "Barbarella" (1968) where Jane Fonda smokes a bong with a man in it?}

Looking forward to more chapters, although the series of tragedies Janis is projected to go threw seem depressing.  Perhaps they are necessary to the story line, only time shall tell.

I would like to say I appreciate your writing style and proper use of grammar.  So many fantastic stories posted here have been diminished by confusing and improper grammar {e.g. "he took her head and rested it upon his bosom" rather than "he took his head and rested it upon her bosom", etc.}



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the detailed review! I too am a fan of breastfeeding scenes, and I have exciting things planned for future stories. I will have to check out "Barbarella." I've never heard of it. Thanks again!

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