[Report This]Date: April 12 2023 5:04 AM Title: A mysterious party
Good writting, on the same tier of notontime and ther other anal-focused writers in a sea of feet-focused stories.
I hope you write more about the buttplugs' torture, especially those that react and are kept alive. I wanna see those girls clench around their slaves using their dirtiest cavities!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2023 7:08 AM Title: A mysterious party
Really great.
Semi-apologetic giantesses are underrated and underrepresented. I feel that's probably the most realistic attitude for a world with shrunken people as an oppressed group, and the fact that they doing it despite not even being 100% enthusiastic about it makes it all the more degrading, and thus hot.
Everything about the disposal was incredibly well done. I liked seeing it from her point of view, and having her still try to flush him even after the toilet clogged and tying that in with her shame was actually inspired. Writing it like it was a momentary panic is great, since it shows his life isn't worth the consideration, but then doubling down on it is even worse for him, and it's wonderful.
I also liked that he doesn't die. Just a personal preference, others might disagree, but I think it's better to have death as a threat than the outcome, at least for the main character.
Author's Response:
I agree about semi apologetic giantesses, they're underrated. I think (at least for me) that half of the giantess kink is a domination kink, like enjoying pleasure through your sexual partner, and the other half is the disturbing use of innocent people. The more they are in distress, the better it is. I feel like unaware misses something in comparison to semi-apologetic. Anyway, thanks for the great review!
[Report This]Date: February 14 2023 2:40 AM Title: A mysterious party
Nice start to a potentially very promising story.
I do appreciate that you mention right from the start that English is not your "native" language; and the few misspellings and improper grammar usage are quite negligible and easily understood by any reader. In point of fact, your spelling and grammar are both better than a lot of native English speakers. Well done on your part.
As to the story plot, you have an interesting story line developing. I can't wait to read more.
By the way, you mention you "really, really like anal stuff" when it comes to giantesses. I agree with you. What's not to like, or even love and worship about a beautiful woman's butt? Female Ass Rules!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the positive review! By the way I posted another chapter, if you're interested