Reviewer: Feodora Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2022 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hello!

I just read this story, and wow, I like it! (This actually brought me to finally creating an Account to write reviews after much thinking)

So, first of all, I like that this is written from a Goddess' daughter's point of view. This is unusual and rare, in fact this is the first story I see form that perspective. I never even thought about it, but now that I read this, I have to say, it's a great idea. At least to me, it gave a different feeling than usual when reading this. Sorry that this is worded odd, I don't know how to describe it. But just, reading a story from this perspective allows the reader to really understand what the girl's feeling is. Not to mention it's hot.

Also, I really love the parts where you wrote about what the goddess does sometimes when crushing normal people. Like the thing with the concert, reading that was quite hot in my opinion. Or the thing with the goddess not washing her feet, etc. was also a great thing to read (When I say a part was hot, then I mean it made me at least wet).

Last things last, I like that you really show how the girl writing the blog feels about all this. Like the "Ew" at one point. Again, it gives a new perspective.

So, all in all, I think this is great. You did really well, and I would love to read more from this. Please continue working on it!

Hope you are having a great day by the way!
Your Feo <3 (Quite the newbie on this Website, as I said, I made this account just to be able to write this)


Author's Response:

Wow, I'm super honored that someone liked my writing enough to make an account to review it :)))


I thought it would be unique and interesting to tell a common story (woman becomes a goddess and uses it for size shenanigans) through the lens of her teenage daughter who isn't exactly on board with her cruelty and disregard for the people beneath her, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The next chapter or two will be about her mom's first few days as goddess, and they'll include a ton of action, I'll make sure that Olivia chimes in with some comments as well :P

I'm having a great day, especially after receiving this review :) Feel free to write more if you want to comment on something that happens once I write the next chapters.