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Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2022 8:57 PM Title: Why can't we live together?

I hope the Holiday bustle calms down for you; still waiting for the next chapter before I voice my own thoughts on the cliffhanger (waiting until you introduce certain plot elements so I can give you a proper shout-out to give you more views; getting reviews from that would require users to register an account here).

Your writing quality is akin to Jelly Tea, and it was crickets when he started putting pen to paper on this site. He built himself up a following by reposting his stories on Deviantart, and then he created a Twitter account to sort of act as an RSS feed for followers of his writing. Greenanon is also similar to you, and his reviewers are mostly from 4chan's /d/ gentle giantess board (right now, your story is mostly shrunken women, and the SW thread's community is somewhat small).


Cowgirls having their faces printed on milk bottles reminds me of a meme known as the 'Henton's Round Meal: Macaroni and Beef'. On its packaging is a photo of Davis for a contest 'Win a Visit with Davis'. So like with the idol handshake and photo campaigns in Japan, I'm imagining some milk bottle with a similar contest with a word bubble over the cowgirl "I'll come to you". 

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