[Report This]Date: July 10 2023 5:41 AM Title: The First Strike, part five
Continua por favor, esto es muy bueno, demasiado. . 🥵
[Report This]Date: July 07 2023 12:40 AM Title: Prologue
Good that you came back! I hope the story continues.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2023 7:47 AM Title: The First Strike, part five
Ho yes you're back ! Your story is one of my favourite
Very nice chapter, I can't wait to read what's next !
[Report This]Date: April 18 2023 8:01 AM Title: The First Strike, part four
Nice ! I was afraid you wouldn't continue the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter
[Report This]Date: March 28 2023 9:54 AM Title: Prologue
Your story is so good, I hope you continue so bad
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I am truly glad you're enjoying and I am continuing it, it's just a slow process. I do have most of the story outlined and I'm really excited for what's to come. Thanks again for reading!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2023 1:57 PM Title: Prologue
I think it would be fun to see Travis used as a tiny bath toy or pool toy in a bath the size of a lake by one of the giantesses. Maybe he'd have a little boat to explore as the giantess takes a bath. Also I hope he develops a foot fetish. Could be enjoyable! Maybe he and his dad both get shrunk together for his cousin or a future girlfriend. Great work!
[Report This]Date: February 02 2023 4:56 AM Title: The First Strike, part three
This is a great story! Fantastic writing. I cannot wait to read more. Keep going with it, it is such an interesting idea.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2022 7:26 AM Title: Prologue
Damn, pretty good story I like how in this world men are submissive yet try to hide it, but deep down they know they cant do anything about it, nice job
[Report This]Date: November 01 2022 2:00 AM Title: The First Strike, part two
I love how you set the scene with the aunt taking her time jogging before she meets with Travis. It shows that this isn’t a big deal for her and that there’s no consequences if she’s late, but for the guys, there probably will be.
In addition to the Aunt, I like how experienced and confident she is with the whole shrinking process and also the worship stuff. I like how she convinced Travis to kiss her daughter’s feet while he was still regular sized. Not to mention that comment about how she put Travis’s dad in her ass one time. Amazing!
Speaking of her daughter, I like Cindy’s contrasting behavior compared to her mother. She also doesn’t seem to care much for the shrinking process and seems that the whole concept is strange which is funny.
I found it shocking how easy it was for Travis to get shrunk. Seems like as long as you know a guy’s name, they could get shrunk. The police didn’t even verify if what happened was true. This seems like the norm, so I’m curious if any guys got shrunk on purpose without committing a crime.
Anyway, I’m curious what happens with Cindy and Travis next and I can’t wait for the next chapter! (I’m also excited for a potential teacher scene soon.) :)
[Report This]Date: October 29 2022 10:22 AM Title: The First Strike, part one
I’m curious about Mrs. Waller. I’m crossing my fingers and hoping that she’s a naughty teacher ready to pounce on him.
Nothing like getting a strike at school. Might be fun if he gets detention too.
I’m liking the strike system and how strict it is. Seems like these guys truly fear if they will shrink or not. And because of that, the women take advantage of it.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! Keep your fingers crossed… she may find her way into the story. Kinda gave me an idea… but we’ll get there! Can’t wait to share the next chapter with you!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2022 6:55 AM Title: Prologue
Actually perfect so far, the only thing is I wish it wasn't family. But other than that it is perfect so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and I’m glad you like it so far. But I am sorry, I know the family stuff isn’t for everyone. I get mixed feelings about it too so that’s why I kept it to just the aunt and cousin to begin. [spoilers] Travis might be shrunk around his mom later but I promise he won’t end up in ‘mommy’ or ‘big sissy’s’ shoes or anything like that.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2022 3:36 AM Title: The First Strike, part one
Love the concept of extended shrinkage for strike offenses against women. Will be interesting to read of the punishments and of extended times shrunk due to strikes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I’m glad you like it! [spoilers] The punishments will indeed intensify as the strike sentences get longer and as our protagonist gets older and deals with older women.
Date: October 28 2022 10:30 PM Title: The First Strike, part one
This is a creative concept, and your writing is pretty tight too. Can't wait to see what you do with this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and saying those things! It really means a lot. And I’m excited to share where it goes as well!