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Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2024 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Redhead's Room

I love chapter 4 on Aryion! Very sad about the main character though, he died gruesomely ^^ How come you haven't uploaded it here?  

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2023 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Redhead's Room

Awesome! Lexi is a really terrifying antagonist, curious to see what happens to all these characters ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you! And believe me when I say that I've got a lot planned for Lexi and the others ;)

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2023 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

This has to be one of the best vore stories I've read in a looong time. Really impressive how you managed to actually create a tension, I was never sure what would happen. And you created a realistic scenario where the shrunken victims could actually fight back - and the characters were actually quite likable! Can't wait for chapter 3, quietly hoping for more eroticism between the giant and the tinies ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the feedback!

I've actually got several chapters drafted for this story as a whole including a few side stories.


It's just been a matter of editing through my drafts and uploading them.

But stay tuned! More to follow.

Reviewer: edgehead123 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2023 7:06 AM Title: 1.) Gone in 60 Seconds

yummy and evil and delicious

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09 2022 11:05 PM Title: 1.) Gone in 60 Seconds

Really good erotic story. Could be a 5-star with a little more back story and/or build up.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2022 1:41 AM Title: 1.) Gone in 60 Seconds

So how many more people are Beverly and Amber going to shrink; or are Lexi and Vanessa going to get their hands on the pills and use them on their own.

I'd like to say "To Bad" for Nate, but was it really?  Are we going to hear anything about Lexi's morning expulsion of Nate's digested body?  Perhaps her giggling at his remains, or being completely indifferent to them?

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2022 10:22 AM Title: 1.) Gone in 60 Seconds

Admirable first offering! Hits on a bunch of good aspects of vore and is concise about it! Look forward to reading more!

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