[Report This]Date: March 16 2023 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very cute erotic short story; I would have preferred a soft voring at the end though. Could also have included more dialogue and some backstory for the necklace. Wonder if you would mind if I did a rewrite for it?
[Report This]Date: December 09 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice, nice story!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story! Thanks for the shout out!
Date: February 12 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Actually, I found this story to be very romantic. There is plenty of lust between the characters, but underlying the story there was something very sweet and innocent about the the feelings the guy felt. He gave into this feelings and some lovely seduction ensued, until he became infatuated with her, as can be seen with that tender moment where he his lovingly resting his face on her thigh. I enjoyed this moment of intimacy, it showed that not only was this guy going to be eaten and destroyed, but so too was she going to sacrifice his thoughts and feelings for her, that in killing him, this too she is willing to take possession of as well.
Stylistically, the pre-vore build up was something I enjoyed, and I liked the description of terror and the betrayal was a very, nice touch which I especially enjoyed.
This is one of my favorite stories on this site and is an example of what I consider to be the best elements of the vore fantasy from my own imagination. A true pleasure to read this very erotic, at times romantically sadistic story.
Date: August 15 2009 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
i do like your style laura its nice to read a story from a womans perspective it seems we are in the minority when it comes to this fetish.
Amanda.